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I have read many classics and absorbed a lot of knowledge which changed the way I think and my view of the world. I am thankful for the wisdom of ancient people. Countless books were written in the past thousands years, but only a few books are still on the nowadays recommended list . No matter how Circumstances changed with the passage of time , valuable things like love and morality will never fade. The modern world alters from day to day , we can not follow all of the trend of times . But if we understand the perpetual wisdom we will find an invariable way to overcome the variation . Therefore my opinion is that the classic is worthy of our appreciation .
But on the other hand , the classics are composed in every period of history including today . Since we are the ancients to people in the future , it’s our responsibility to leave heritage as valuable as those classics . That is to say , not only should we read and learn the edification from the past time ,but also should we explore this scientific world and generate new ideas . Because of the progress of science and technology , human beings never understand the earth and the universe so deeply as nowadays. Based on the knowledge of physical laws , we barely know the truth of the operation of all things . The unknown universe and complex society are just like a toweringly building and we climb the stairs which were built by predecessors toward higher place . Now we are in a convenient ground to get adequate materials to build the new ladder of our generation .
Classics and new changes are both necessary for the development of us . There is no conflict between them . On the contrary , changes need the experience of classics and classics are composed in a mass of changes . So there is my view : based on the classics , explore the world and generat